All Comments on 'Chloe's Corruption Ch. 04'

Please write faster. This story is amazing

Keep up the writing. I know its not everyone's cup of tea but I thoroughly enjoy your stories

... and glad that you were able to continue this series.

Chloe's Corruption is one of the most titillating works you have -- and just in terms of visual imagery -- a step above many of the other literotica authors here.

Keep up the good work!

Like the other commentators, I'm glad to see you back and that you're continuing this wonderful story.

One of my favorites by far!

So glad you finished this story. Keep up the incest themes, they're super splooshy

I'm glad you're back with your sweet and disturbing story. Please continue!

Would love to read about the father's affection to Chloe when he learns that his baby girl is with child. He's an asshole, but with good vibes.

Loved this one, especially the twist at the end.

So glad you continued with the story! I checked every few months for an update. Curious to see what you are goi by to do with the mother’s reaction and with the pregnancy. Please don’t make it into a threesome, continue the story with just dad/daughter and no mother involved. Love that the dad is an asshole. Lol.

You always make me cum, thank you. So happy to read more of your work.

While I usually love preg risk and impregnation stories this one is a downer in that it turned out to be VERY nonconsensual.

Bad Dad is much worse than a mere asshole, he is a rapist for tricking his supposedly beloved daughter into an unwanted and against her will pregnancy.

I very much hope he gets his just due in the sequel to come. Please make it very inventive and properly horrid for him, perhaps a miscarriage or abortion followed by a "special meal" for asshole daddy before he learns what it is made of.

Would love to see how her eventual pregnancy unfolds

The father did nothing malicious in this story whatsoever. He gave her pills, assuming she was worried about the vitamins (she did say in an earlier story about giving him a baby). It was entirely her fault for assuming the bottle of pills she was given were morning after pills. She fully consented to the sex that they had, falsely believing in her assumption that she was protected.

Good story

So good to see you back and another story from you! I'd love to read from the father's perspective and his fascination of him inside his daughter.

The little slut wanted it! And she knew it ;)

So glad to see a new addition to this story! It’s one of my favorites. You have so much going on here, the internal drama, the narration, the power imbalance, and the raw sexuality of it all. You’re a skilled writer and I really enjoy this series. Thank you!

This is one of my favourite series ever. I have read it many times. Thank you for writing it! It is both very hot and very well-written, so congrats on that.

They kinda glossed over whether if they fucked on her mothers bed and how she felt about it or if she noticed family pictures on the bed mantle while it happened

You are gifted writer Sir. I never liked F/D stories much I am more of B/S kinda guy but this one changed my taste forever. WOW kudos to you. I can't wait for you to publish more chapters ...

Dude you are such an amazing writer. The plot twist, the structure, the elegance, the seduction not sure if stroking to it will reduce the praise I feel for this story and your style. Please write more, we all are waiting holding our .....

IDK why, but I laughed at the part. Me amused, but I like these plot twists. See you soon on ch5. I wonder though how does the mom not notice what’s going on in her roof. There’s no explanation on that.

I love this story... I love daddies breeding their little girls. Can't wait for more xxx

Her father is a dick! I really hope she's not pregnant and gets a implant.

Oh, please do continue! I'd love to see chapter five!

Hmmm, wondering if the Mother knows? Will he keep breeding her after she is pregnant.

Will this great series ever see another part? I really would love to see it being continued!

We never did get confirmation of whether or not she's pregnant or what's going to happen with her mom, makes me wonder if this series is complete or if there's going to be another part eventually?

Wish the story would continue. There are so many unanswered questions: did she get pregnant, does the mom find out, are they a couple now... Btw, the dad is so freaking hot and their relationship is so erotic. 🔥🔥🔥

Please write more chapter's to this story ...... maybe she got Pregnant , maybe her Mother's come's home early one day only to find them having sex together & then the Mother join's in !!!!!!

There should be more chapters to this story as she grows with his love child while still having wild romps with him

I can relate to her concern about getting pregnant.

Her telling her father that she wanted him to breed her, came back to haunt her

I foolishly did the same thing with my daddy ,after the first time that he climaxed inside of me.

I figured that if he already came inside of me, then why not continue to let him ?

I didn't know it, but I was ovulating, the first time we had consensual sex ,but I soon found out that I was pregnant a couple of weeks later

I've told this on other sites, but for readers who didn't know I had a baby girl with my daddy and we began living together after my mother abandoned us.

It's been almost two years and I'm pregnant again with my daddy's baby.

Well then… Plot twist!

I would love to see another chapter for this. Maybe even where the daughter starts thinking maybe it won’t be so bad and even encourages more sex with the father to ensure pregnancy.

This one needs one more chapter. Amazing story.

Good Stories - Love to see Mom discover them and join in...maybe once Chloe gets Pregnant Dad takes her Ass...

I hope Chloe wises up for her own good in the next chapter. By the way her thoughts go, she clearly is not a dumdum, she sounds rather inteligent but maybe naive in matters of the flesh. She could not have found the worse person to teach her! I am sorry her dad really sounds like a selfish sCUM bag. First being unapologetic about what he did and then doing it again - just using her for his pleasure and then using her to get the son that he wanted. What a sociopath! I really hope Chloe has a better ending and it does not involve that prick!

I am not sure, that there will be another chapter, as it is needed. Thank you for your work. It was a thrilling experience. The whole naivity and obliviosness struggle? Simply perfect. Thank you.