by mchucha
Thanks for continuing this great story, I was concerned that the delay meant you had stopped writing it
On a personal note, I would like to see a little more embarrassment from Chloe with how she is dressed like the first few chapters as you seam to be loosing a bit of her personality and innocence by concentrating on what she is doing rather than how she is feeling however this is just my opinion and please keep writing this story :)
Regards
please keep writing it but be careful you don't lose the story in the detail
love this series. please continue. I am patiently waiting for the next.