All Comments on 'Chloe's Introduction'

Great start to what I’m sure will be an epic story…can’t wait for the next chapter.. congratulations on your first publication…🥂💋

That is a wonderfully written story and was a very thrilling read.

I love it. You explore your fetish with real skill and delight. Looking forward to part 2 xxxxxx Pix

What a start! You have whetted the appetite with consummate ease. Such an easy, accomplished style and I’m waiting for part two. I’m so glad you’ve taken the plunge. Excellent 5*

Very good indeed. More please.

Delicious and you have me hooked already. Eagerly awaiting Part 2.

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Loved the premise, loved the execution. Yes, there were a few typos, that, if corrected, would have made this story truly first rate; but I'm giving it five stars anyway. There is a special, genuinely erotic quality to the storytelling that deserves recognition. Welcome to erotic writing Chloe. Pixehoff is a favorite of mine, and you couldn't do better for a guide in this genre (imho.) i eagerly await your next submission. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Great first story, and a very interesting setup too. The ideal way to introduce this set of characters: not too much direct action yet, and plenty of intrigue for the next chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

A lovely start, nice pace and the tension gradually building. Promises to be a great series.

I can relate to mia, in the chair and at ghe mercy of Chloe's hands. Recalls a someone who used to do my hair, big butch girl, with short hair, visibly tattoed and pierced. Looked quite intimidating, but she had a gentle manner and a very sensuous touch. I loved the feel of her hands on my scalp, and fantasised about her having her way with me.

I need to book an appointment! Love the story and great for a first, keep up the good work,

Love bethany xx

Oh, you tease! I hope that next chapter comes soon. Very much liked your writing style. Watch out as a few have said for the typos, but they are minor.

Absolutely outstanding, well spaced out, well explained. This can only get better and better. Thank you

simply wonderful

thank you everyone who has commented on my first effort! Part 2 has now been submitted so please keep an eye out!

Great work. I love the slow build.

Pappasleaze!

Very Interesting!

Hallo Chloe!

Your story (Chloe's Introduction.) is quite charming,,, yes!

Thank-you 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms..

The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

Hi GayKat - many thanks for your lovely comments! I hope you enjoy the rest of the series!

I wonderful introduction to what looks like a fabulous clandestine arrangement.

The characters were developed superbly, however even though it was all last minute I don’t think it was fully credible to not tell Chloe something about what was to take place. Just as well that she seems 100% up for it !

Chloe - Lovely start to what I anticipate will be a great series. I love finding the erotic in our everyday world. In your intro you say there's no sex in this chapter... I disagree with that. For me, the erotic tension in this chapter is what I look for. Nice work.

Wonderful idea, salon tales are special ….. its a special surrounding and the smell and atmosphere, just extraordinary ….. and make over hair do’s are definitely very exciting ….. an inverted bob, chin length front and high shaved nape line looks stunning, BUT this bob permed would do turn mia into the cutest girly ….. lovely written chapter

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Lovely introduction to the larger story. I know several salon ladies and used to date the daughter of one, but they were nothing like this. Women will often confide more to their salon stylists than they will to their husbands or therapists, because the interaction is more intimate. That said, I can see the potential for, shall we say, a higher clientele with particular tastes to "make special arrangements," as they say. Chloe is intrigued but so was Alice when she went down the rabbit hole. Haha

You said no sex! The sexual tension in the salon was intense. I can not wait to continue Chloe’s introduction to this world!

This story had me salivating by the end. I’m absolute loving the premise and location of all of this. I’m excited to continue and see more of where things end up going from here.

Love it! ❤️