All Comments on 'Chocolate and Gold Ch. 06'

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bruce22bruce22about 14 years ago
Nice Touch

Her catching him absolutely chaste. My problem is that it is very well written and beautiful to read even to imagine but really it does not feel very much like "real" life. There are always some bumps but here it is all sugary and no lemon. In fact I am still waiting for the extraordinarily beautiful Vanny to meet someone else as she travels around the world. After all she has learned that she sells better when she is aroused.....

KarenEKarenEabout 9 years ago
Re-Reading

Looking good, hope there are no unhappy surprises!

I'm assuming her "project" with her mother is to lessen her mother's dependence on Vannie, allowing her to relocate with Harry?

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 8 years ago
Visits

I'm a little surprised that one or the other of them hasn't taken a long weekend for a visit.

They haven't been together since June, and we've had the 4th of July and Labor Day Weekend since then, at least!

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