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Click hereGently I closed the door and walked to her. She threw her arms around my neck in a hug and laughed softly.
"It worked! It actually worked. Thank you so much for letting me do that!"
"No problem babe." I whispered and hugged her back.
Kim pulled back and her eyes seemed to take on a sinister look.
"We both know this Stella woman. She was in our class. She's hurtful, full of herself and always ends up cheating. Brandon deserves someone better then her!" She hissed.
"Someone like you?" I demanded with crossed arms and then blushed. "Sorry, I know I can't....be with him like that."
"We can figure all that out....after we end them." Kim insisted with a smile.
The next few weeks were definitely going to be interesting.
their "Plan" is good. so many typos or wrong words I assume English is not the Author's first language. That takes the edge off the story. Minor complaint. Hope that Monica gets Brandon eventually and we learn about his dad's reasons for the abuse
The second Chapter was just as well received as the first and i cannot thank you all enough. I will not say if anyone has guessed right or wrong, but i like that you are thinking about the future of the story. Chap 3 should be up today, and 4 is finished, i just need to add the finishing touches. Thank you all for the support.
Choices101
A lot of erotic love and sex going on in this story.
I hope that he kicks his dad ass for what the old bastard did to him when he was a kid.
He must be his Uncles kid for his dad to hate him so much.
I hope that Monnie finds a way to get him in her life sexually.
Thanks for the read.
I absolutely love it!! There needs to be another installment soon. It's so cute, romance, and a little bit horny ayy?~?!
All in all it was a very good story. I liked the game play of verse between the two main characters, the details of each of the scenes and the portrayal of family dysfunction.
My only main issue is with the word "then." It was used incorrectly in so many places that it detracted from the smoothness of the story. The "then"s being spoken of are those that should have been "than." Too often these days I see this error on Literotica. Fix it and you'll be gold.
Again, good story.
sinwizard
Just as interesting as the first part, Hope you keep it going. Thanks for your time and effort.