by writingn00b
Obviously this is in the wrong category. Only mention of husband they moved to the Bay Area he works lots of hours. Really
This has to be some adolescent boy's fantasy that was found handwritten on cum-stained ruled paper torn from a spiral notebook.
Hopefully tke kid plans a career in either math or science. His future in language arts is bleak.
Is Stephanie so far back in the woods, she will stay lost forever. And with her ex husband no longer in the story (of coures, he divorced the slut, what did you think he would do?) I only wonger who will shatter the Krystel? Stephanie or maybe the next wife she and her band of rapists try to seduce?
She went to cheating gang bang slut too fast. I mean she shows up and see's strange men in the friends apartment and didn't object like "I need to get home" and even when they knew her for a second and asked about her tit size she was still not scared or offended. Then she strips and sucks and fucks and on and on.
If it was intended to be a stroke story only you still missed the mark. I guess if there are future parts it will be about how she becomes a pimped out whore or a porn star.
For many years I have harbored a rape fantasy. I have tried to explain it to my husband, but he doesn't quite understand. I love him tremendously but his idea of kinky sex is leaving the lights on while he does me missionary. I have watched many video portraying rape scenarios and for the most part you can really tell they are staged. However there have been a few that have made me wonder. Those seem to be the ones where I get the most turned on. This story also made me a bit horny. I loved that she was surprised by the two men she had never met before. While she was still safe, it definitely added to the authenticity of it all.
She doesn't love her husband, because if she did, she would have ran away that morning and told him all about it. But going further, she just through away her marriage without a second thought. She left him behind for her new friends.
Rape by any other name.......also totally in the wrong category....
One, this is the wrong category.
Two. invest some money in going to see a psychiatrist.
Three. better still post you shit on a different site altogether.
Literoticas review team should be ashamed of themselves. Open minded is one thing, but by printing it in the L.W. instead of the trash can. Lit is saying that they condone this garbage. It like "trump", saying there are good people on both sides
WORST STORY I'VE READ HERE! PERIOD! I STARTED AT CHAPTER 2 BUT READ THE AUTHOR'S SUGGESTION TO READ 1 FIRST. SO I DID. NOW I'LL BE NAUSEATED THE REST OF THE NIGHT! GOD, THAT WAS AWFUL - EVEN THOUGH AFTER A BIT I JUST SKIPPED AROUND TO THE END. DAMN!
i was boned from start to finish, you are brilliant, and don't take any notice of those who can't separate fantasy from reality, they're obviously the real rapists, lol.
Sounds to me like rape plain and simple, a typical slut story I personally don't enjoy these.
This is disappointing as it makes it seem like women want raped. There is a huge difference between reluctance or being willingly forced and rape.
I will debate if it’s even worth reading the remaining chapters. I only hold out hope her husband finds out and dumps her and has here friends imprisoned for rape.