by pink_paradise
The story went precisely where I expected. The writing for the atmosphere and the action was very descriptive and arousing.
This is apparently your first contribution -- so thanks, and I'll be looking for more.
With your interest in photos .... I'd point out that the category which seems to be LEAST used is one of my favorites -- Illustrated. Perhaps you could revitalize it.
Thank you for your feedback. I am currently working on a new story.
Something a bit different. Hope you write some more. Enjoyed it.