All Comments on 'Christmas Cleaning'

My ONLY complaint about this story (which isn't really a complaint at all) is that the sexual scenes once they decide to have sex seem rushed. Otherwise, the buildup was good, keep up the good work!

Good one. It could be interesting to read about their relatioship developng over the next two years.

Good start...would like to read more.

I liked it. Although the once they got to actually having sex it was kind of quick. Describing the rim job and her deepthroating him could have gone into more detail. Good story overall.

Excellent!