All Comments on 'Christmas Eve'

by Longstretch

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Cute, funny--

I liked the twist, in fact, the whole story. Nice work. You could easily expand it by quite a bit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
not goood

it was not so erotic

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