All Comments on 'Christmas Eve Shenanigans'

Pathetic gutter slut, ruining her life, her husband's, her husband's parent(s)(?) and her unborn children, all in one stupid evening of whoredom. With any luck at all, the martian slut ray also causes heart attacks, for both her and the 'father' that treats his own son worse than a piece of dog shit.

Wonderfully graphic for a first time writer. I didn't spot a single gaff. The only way it could have been better was some eventual shows of pleasure on her part. Do keep 'em coming.

Good story. Makes me consider my son's partner!

Love it, hot sexy, she wants him, she needs to show him next time! Please please continue.