All Comments on 'Christmas in July'

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becontree2001ukbecontree2001ukabout 3 years ago

Nice story. Does go to show though, be careful what you say to your wife lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Damn, this is a good one. I'm only sorry that it took me a year to find it. The wife being hurt by her husband drawing attention to her weight in front of the neighbors was understandable, and her getting angry and mockingly calling him, "mister Softie" was humiliatingly erotic.

My only suggestion would have been a bit more attention to details. For example, when the wife says, "You are taking me shopping tomorrow." , something like "for a new, sexy wardrobe for other men to enjoy" should have been added. As it stood, she could have meant food shopping. Thanks for such a good story.

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