All Comments on 'Christmas Sex Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I hate stories that are told 3rd person, using I, me, you, we and so on. It makes the story more believable if you you use names. Just my take!

blkislandguyblkislandguyabout 2 months agoAuthor

Okay thank you for the feedback. Other than that did you enjoy the story? This was my first story and I plan on publishing more.

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