All Comments on 'Christmas Surprise'

by Unverzagt

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RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleover 14 years ago
sweet

Beautiful story, well told.

sexy_suziesexy_suzieover 14 years ago
handjob stories are great

i loved your story, again thankyou

UnverzagtUnverzagtover 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I really appreciate the comments, support, and votes! This is my second submission to this site, and I'm really glad so many people seem to like my stories. Thank you taking the time to read my writing!

Midian_LovecraftMidian_Lovecraftover 14 years ago
Well done!

Sweet and subtle, erotic and very well written. Keep writing! :)

Cate

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Outstanding

Great story that exhibits restraint in the writing, the characters feel like individuals and not mere props. Well done, a rare gem.

Buster2UBuster2Ualmost 2 years ago

5 stars. I love a happy ending

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