All Comments on 'Christy Was Well Undone'

More wheat less chafe.

Oh, Please...not well done, What a load of crap!

I hate to bust your very bias attitude bubble, but you couldnt be more wrong. This story has been repeated( different venues) again and again. Its no secret interracial sexual encounters are happening all over this world and you and others bigots have vastly contribute so much to the issue. You have made sex between your white women and us black men so taboo that white wives, sisters,mothers and girlfriends, get wet just imagining interracial sex.

and i agree with endowed-2

the only thing i'm not a fan of is the whole situation with his daughter. but other than that i loved it, thought it was very hot and would love to hear more detail about Christy's weekend training

... 'supine'!

It is defined as "(of a person) Lying face upward."

Therefore it doesn't really fit in the context in which you used it - "Around her supine neck was a pearl necklace he had bought her as a wedding anniversary present."

And that is just one of the errors and inanities in this 'story'!!

Two stars!!

I love it, although i feel like you can continue this for 1-2 more chapters keep it up.