All Comments on 'Cialis Seduction'

Good premise.

But sex is too rushed. Was there a deadline that had to be met to get to the end? That's what it seemed like.

Three stars.

I’m going to be honest. I only workshopped and edited this story over two days. I have a bunch of drafts to other stories I’ve never finished (all are I think 6,000 words and counting), so I think I just wanted to say I was able publish SOMETHING. I know this is brief. But hoping that aspect can be overlooked by some. I just wanted to tell this particular story. Didn’t want to overthink it too much.

Don't over think it.

You are great!

Just keep posting your stuff, and stop doubting yourself