All Comments on 'Cindy Gets Motivation Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Absolutely lovely story. The adventure continues and it may get them married at the end. Hopefully if they do get married that they will continue to love and explore each other.

RomanticHeart630RomanticHeart630about 3 years ago

Loved it... I hope there is another part coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wonderful intimate romance! Would love to see it continue into a more intensive M/f relationship with tougher and maybe more restrictive and controlling bdsm situations intended to meet Cindy's future motivational challenges!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Excellent story.

Tigr2Tigr2about 3 years ago

Typos occasionally distracted from the otherwise exceptional story line.

As an author, try proof reading your story from top to bottom, but read from right to left. You will be amazed how many incorrect word uses (form instead of from).

Thank you for an excellent series.

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