by RetroFan
Story was ok. 3 stars. Liked the Government meeting etc. and Money Some.
Was hoping when the Aliens opened the room up after the showers, the couples were forced to switch to other BF's and GF's, then switch again, so each had sex with the other. Some Anal.
Also hoped the girls were pregnant but not sure by who or why as they thought they were still virgins and didn't remember having sex with the guys either.
Thanks for writing.
Scubasam
Too long winded for me. I got quite bored at the beginning reading everything about everybody. I couldn't get past first page kept jumping to see where it was going.
On the plus side given how much detail went into story I think it would be good in book format and sell quite quickly.
Interesting read. Having someone proofread it to help some word usage and grammar issues would help with readability. Thank you for taking the time to write for our pleasure.