Cinnamon's First Date Ch. 01

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"Then so do I," he said levelly, taking a small handful from one of hir popcorns. "Wish I'd thought of this back at Fenucci's."

Cinnamon's stomach was flip-flopping again. As more moviegoers filed into their seats, shi could feel their eyes on hir and hir date, even hear some of the comments. "Yeah," shi agreed weakly, slipping hir free hand into his. "Though maybe you're only doing this because it'd be too dark to see under my blankets."

Even in the extremely dim light, shi could see Hunter blushing, practically feel the heat coming off of him. "You're not going to let me forget that, are you?"

Shi gave his hand another squeeze before guiding it around hir waist. His palm came to rest high on hir withers, where chestnut fur gave way to the pale, freckled skin of hir lower back. "Do you want me to?" shi whispered into his ear.

"No," he replied.

"Then let's not forget it. Let's just... enjoy the movie."

Hunter took a deep breath, leaning back against the rear wall of the theatre. "Sounds good," he nodded. His fingers caressed back and forth, crossing that penumbral border between hir human and equine aspects. "Thank you for saying yes."

Cinnamon glanced at him as the lights began to fully darken. Static issued from the speakers, in preparation for the first of the dozen or so commercials and previews. Do it, shi scolded hirself. You promised yourself you would. Do it! Do it now! Before you lose your nerve!

Shi had wanted to reply with something heartfelt, something that let him know just how much shi appreciated him asking hir out in the first place, and asking hir out somewhere so public. More than once, shi'd heard the rumors of folks who'd wanted to get to know hir better, even intimately... but they just didn't want anyone finding out about that. Shi had been worried that would be every relationship in hir life. Derby's dirty little secret.

But not Hunter.

Any words shi'd come up with over the course of the evening hadn't seemed quite right, hadn't been able to do hir feelings justice. So in the moments before the first thunderously loud car ad blasted across the screen, shi grabbed him by the belt, dragged him tight against hir torso, and planted a bruisingly forceful kiss on his lips.

His expressions changed like a tumbling waterfall, lit by the screen. Cinnamon faced them all with a wide open, honest and hopeful smile. Shi released hir grip on his belt, patted his rump affectionately, and then turned hir attentions to the big screen.

"I-"

"Shhh," shi scolded him. "No talking during the movie."

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End of Chapter 01!

Stay tuned for Chapter 02: The Long, Long Kiss Goodnight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I just read this story and I love it; I wish I could date Cinnamon too :_: Really hoping for more awkward cuddles, dates and, ummm ahem, *things*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Waiting patiently

I know it's been a while since first chapter has been posted, but I'm still really hyped for a following chapter, I love Cinnamon ! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Is the next part coming soon?

I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Incredible

Very very veeeeeeery promising ! Please keep up the good work ! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ratings will get better in your future chapters

I'll admit, the pronouns broke the rhythm of the story for me at first. It felt frustrating, and I wondered to myself why you didn't just use she and her as most writers I've encountered when writing trans or futa characters. But then it clicked- your character doesn't identify as a she and her, they identify as a unique gender. You would be simplifying and misrepresenting the identity of your character with she and her. Once I got that, and once I got a few pages in and my brain accepted shi and hir as pronouns, the story flowed nicely. I have a feeling your rating will get much better for the chapters to come as it'll be readers who have adjusted to the pronoun usage.

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