All Comments on 'Circle Star Slave Pt. 01'

Great start to this entertaining story. Enjoy your writing style. Looking forward to more adventures for Erin. Cheers.

Great start, Carl

Highly enjoyable.

another great story from Carl. hope there is a chapter 2. master james should get erin to teach him more about banking so he can make more money, so he doesn't have to put her out so often to pay off the loan. i see love and more after the 8 years are over..