All Comments on 'City Boy Plows Farm Woman'

Two words; 1) outstanding, and 2) MORE!

I liked it. You need a proof reader or an editor. Would like to read more of their story. Also, more than one page is much better. Four stars.

Agreed on proofreader. Good story. Could definitely be longer.

First story 5* with reservations:

• Stretch out the time between the 'spark' and the flames

• Edit this & next installment.

You have a gift.