All Comments on 'Civil Penalty Pt. 08'

Nice kinky stuff! Of course, it would have been better for Elizabeth if the sentence would have been overturned (already), but it provides for a lovely tale.

Welcome back. Been missing the story. Some nice new twists.

"Bradford, Cummings, and Gortmundy"? Oh, I'm stealing that. You can expect suitable reciprocity soon... Hmm, "Avicia, Bung and Featherman: (Quality services for only the most "discerning" client)....

Great stuff, as always.

Loving the plot twists. It will be interesting to see how the conspiracy unwinds and what happens to all those involved in it. It appears that Beth is evolving into a sexual dominant right when Giaana delivers herself on a platter for some fun times. Here's to Giaana's husband accidentally purchasing a monthly does of Horny Juice on the black market so that she can live the dream a little longer.

Well worth the wait. I am liking the plot twists. Looking forward to the next installment.

MrSmith, hmm, he didn’t realise he’d set up an order for monthly deliveries by mistake. There was a little box you had to unselect to make it a one-off purchase. Damn sneaky vendor.

It seems that Ms. Cartwright is performing some very important educational functions while a slave.

A ray of light for Beth. Very good chapter. Few stories that explore that kind of abuse also take time to explore the after effects and rehabilitation after such an ordeal, or sincere regret like Eamon feels. Certain authors could take lessons from you.

Enjoying the overall story, thank you. This chapter finally sees things turning around. That's nice to see and gives hope that the whole thing will be resolved satisfactorily.

You're having great fun with this, I hope.

Great story! And I love the different vibe of female empowerment -- very different and refreshing from most of the stories on this site. I sure hope this series continues!

The story is much more subtle, and therefore erotic, than most erotica dealing with these dynamics. Great work!

Really have loved this storyline. Cant wait for the next chapter!

This story has had any number of changes in Beth. Her submission has really turned her into a well balanced individual. I doubt she would have helped Zack and Emily in her prior persona. It is nice to see Jackson and Norman being picked off for their part in this saga Next up is the General and SEC slug.

I don't see how Beth's experience isn't going to be public knowledge. I know the world of legalized slavery is part of the story so it shouldn't, in the end, be problem for her professionally. Personally if she doesn't become CEO, this chapter is the first we have ever heard of the BOD, who were silent regarding a key C suite executive's problem, she should find another firm.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

5 Stars and love the way it has moved around in interesting directions and with great story telling so keep up the great direction of this story. Cheers

I loved the Emily and Zack scenes. Maybe Beth was able to help them because she did develop more empathy because of her own experiences as a slave, as another commenter has suggested. It has a great plot and interesting character development, while, at the same time giving us some very juicy and detailed play by play descriptions of the sexual encounters. This is a fantastically well written story and I can hardly wait to be able to read the rest of it.

This story is not over. Do more.

Really enjoyed your writing and can't wait to read more of this story.

Enjoyable but it felt a little rushed.

Suddenly finding out Norman head of legal had taken her to a bdsm club and used her in public must be a whole chapter on it's own. I know you like nice ending but it would be nice if she didn't have honey juice affecting her so we could fine out if her body was really enjoying being a 3 hole slut. Hopefully this is not the end, especially want to know what happened to security who didn't react to her alarm when the 3 guys from sales were using her.

Loved the role reversal 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Well things certainly sped up in that chapter. We knew nothing about Norman taking her to a bdsm club, etc and still nothing about the security failure but what a rollercoster of an instalment. ⛤⛤⛤⛤⛤