All Comments on 'Claimed'

Boring

Yes, maybe boring, if all you're looking for is pain and orgasms. It's refreshing to read something more sensitive and emotional occasionally. That said, can't help but wonder what lies ahead for the Claimer and the Claimee. That should stir the imagination of the reader. Will there be a follow-up to this ritual ceremony?

On another note, though, while well written descriptions setting the mood and feelings in the room, it could have used some proof reading to catch some errors in wording and grammar. I gave it five stars.