All Comments on 'Claiming Khym'

by AllenWoody

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love it

This is excellent. Super hot. Hope there is more 🙂

The_WatermanThe_Watermanover 4 years ago
Fantastic!

Having read your opening comments, I expected the story to be crap! It was anything but. Your collaboration with your co-author should continue. Best BDSM Story I have read on Lit. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Complete Agreement

I read the previous comments and couldn't have agreed more. What's the next step in their relationship? Does Khym move in as his full time slave? Does he put a collar on her that only he can remove? Does he mark her as his with a tattoo or even a brand?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Perfect!

Amazing - I feel like you got inside my head to write this! The way you captured what it feels like to want, to NEED, to be owned, to be used for another’s pleasure, to seek the pain, and the joy of finding a complementary partner. More please!

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Hello everyone! I'm just like you; I enjoy writing my fantasies out and sharing them with others. I want to improve as a writer so I'm open to constructive feedback.