All Comments on 'Clans of Luteri Bk. 02 Ch. 05-07'

The suspense is killing me! How am I supposed to get anything done

I absolutely love this story! Please don't let Kane die or get hurt to badly.

Kane and Aslin are both needed to tell both clans about the reason for the war between them.

I really dig the way both Travishi and Corsarie use humor to make life so much more joyful

Hope the next chapters are ready soon.

Wow! Looking forward to the next instalment! (Patiently obvs 😉)

Tess (uk)

Oh my god can this story get any more exciting........its absolutely EPIC!

Wonderful trio of chapters. Looking forward to the follow on.

what an incredible story! It’s like watching a movie, your words are so vivid

Bravo!!!

Bravo!!!

So exciting! To the rescue! Will corsaire help them?

Which editor do we have to hound to get the next installment posted ASAP?

Omg I really have to get to work already, Hart.

Stupendous.

xoxo

Cliffhanger! Noooooo!

The Corsaire's hate of the Tavashi will be as nothing to their shared hate to those who fooled them both.

wwoowwoooow

It continues better and better with each section. Your ability to imagine and put those imaginings to paper are amazing. Please keep writing. 💜💖

I LOVE the direction this has taken!!!

I Wonder . . .

Does anyone else think we just found out which Clan kidnapped Aslin and why?

Ahhhhh! How will I get anything done now? I can't wait, and also I'm pretty sure that you won't give us too tragic of an ending which sooths my anxiety.

I’m not too bright, apparently, so I need you to spell out the issue with the truce band. I’ll get no rest until I know.

And I can’t wait to watch Duellan get their asses kicked.

Ahhh. The plot is starting to develop more. Love this story and the complexity waiting to be revealed.

Great story!! I love it! ❤️

Omg it’s all coming together! I can’t wait fir the next chapter!

Aslin is pregnant. No way she isn't counting the days before their trip to the shrine. I bet Kavini is on to Duellan anways now. He must have been making inquiries about outgoung ships, so I feel confident Corsaire will come to the rescue.

Hey, Everyone. Harp here. Putting this in comments in the desperate hopes people will see it. The final installment, two chapters and the epilogue, has already been submitted. It is waiting in the queue but it has not been released yet. It was nothing deliberate on my part and it is out of my hands. Email me if you’d like, but please do not skewer me. It is there, I swear that it is. For Joymac, since it is plaguing you and I know how that feels, I will fess up—In the sex scene at Corsaire Hold, Kane blindfolds Aslin with the truce band and then it apparently evaporates into thin air, a continuity error I only just noticed this time around, which is about my seventy-sixth reading of the thing. None of you seemed to have spotted it, but when I saw it, I felt like there was a neon light arrow ten feet high with multicolor trailing lights leading straight to it. -Harp

Duellan! It was those dirty rats! I wonder if Aslin's mother is still alive. Refreshing more than a sane person should to see if there's been another story posted.

This story is so AWESOME!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Bought "the siblin and the siren" because I felt so silly refeshing so often. I liked it a lot, and it was really nice to learn more about this universe!

This is so good. You have built up the suspense so well. I cannot wait for the end.

Hot urine.

Love it, as always. Can 't wait for the rest. Who cares about little discontinuities when the story is hot ;)

I had my guesses and theyve been confirmed. The Duellan are also the likely reason Aslin and her mother went missing.