All Comments on 'Clara Wants More'

by GoldRogue

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w8ingnoww8ingnowover 6 years ago
loved it

great story, has legs. hope you have more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Super

Super little story. Hope you continue with Claras' adventures. She is a 5 star lady!

mammoetmammoetover 6 years ago
great story

more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story

Plausibility is always a big issue when I read a story on this website. You delivered, Gold Rogue. Thank you for that. One important point: take one for posterity (future generations); not prosperity (the accumulation of wealth).

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I'm liking the Clara stories. Suggestion: get an editor. 4*.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pick, pick, pick

The word is shuddered, not shuttered - as in closed for the winter.

Other than that I gave it five stars, but no one seems to see that wrong usage. I can hope though.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 6 years ago
I Dearly Love straightforward women!

Thank you for Clara...and Lori...

...and you're giving me high hopes for Liz! :+))

All others...contact me privately? :+)))

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