All Comments on 'Cleavage Cruising'

Either write a chapter 2 or take it down and do some more with it. You have a great start, you just quit too soon.

Need immediate follow-up!!! Going to be a great cruise!!

Agree with the two other comments. We need more :)

Story line was good. The only problem was the ending I presume is chapter 1 and chapter 2 will have a extra special enfinf for both parties. Or it could end with the man proposing to the lovey woman and her saying yes.

ier Very interesting at times. But it needs a better ending and maybe a little more talking about the people and what they do for a living, or where they live, or even their likes and don't likes.

44H was a bummer to an otherwise promising story. Couldn't read on after that. 44HH (=44I) is size underbust 44 / overbust 53. Very large woman with comparatively unimpressive breasts.