All Comments on 'Close Observation Ch. 17'

by L.Fortune West

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Really????????

Aaaahhhhhhhh, you can't end it there!!!!!!!!!!

You'd better put the next chapter up pretty damn quickly.

This whole story has me absorbed, it is a masterpiece of emotion.

Bravo fella, bravo.

L.Fortune WestL.Fortune Westabout 4 years agoAuthor
More to come

There’s probably another couple of chapters to come. Thanks for the feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Ditto -

"You'd better put the next chapter up pretty damn quickly."

I could not have said it better or more directly than that...

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