All Comments on 'Close to the Heart Pt. 06'

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

A beautiful end to a wonderful story

Loved every second of this. Whatever you write next I can't wait

ender2k2k over 3 years ago

That was a very creative story.

And I love the happily ever after ending you gave them. It would be wonderful if you tell the stories of the new couple too. Thanks.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Great story, and ending like i hoped and thought!

Arsenique almost 3 years ago

Very erotic and touching story. All sorts of unexpected twists and turns. I agree with ender2k2k that stories of the new couple would be great, though perhaps it would be hard to avoid some repetition. In any case, Bravo! 5-stars for every chapter.

Anonymous9 months ago

I expected Derek to become “normal size”. I take the wish Leanne made was to find a man who could love her and marry her. Then the wish dream went to the next couple. Could the three girls in the burger joint be the Fates?

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