by ikitten8
Hope you plan on making a part 2 loved this story. Hoe you bring the Victoria secret model that her father was conditioning into the next part. Great story keep up the good work.
Pretty good story and pretty well written... But I just HATE, abusive mother-fuckers that take advantage of their more powerful position, especially when they use deceitful tactics to do it... I gotta stay out of this Non-Con category!!
A decent story as far as it went. You have talent, but need to make your stories longer. They end abruptly, as if you are on a deadline or are bored.