All Comments on 'Clove and Spice'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

holy fuckkk... its like you hacked into my brain and exploited it mindd fuckk , setting and imagery were great, it was extremley realistic, you should be a writer some day o_o anon 16 M FL

o1dirtydogo1dirtydogover 11 years ago
WOW

Great read. Thanks for sharing this tale.

MsWhiteRose0183MsWhiteRose0183over 11 years ago
Needs a part 2

I loved this story. As a Dom woman it impressed me. I want to read more.

jdlaw001jdlaw001over 11 years ago

Wow that was hot hope it continues

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More Please!

Really enjoyed this. Both the build-up and payoff were great. I'd love to see this story continued, especially with more character development for Eva, and to see the two actually develop feelings for each other. There's a lot of room for an interesting back-story for Eva.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

This definatly needs to be continued!

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