All Comments on 'Club Exit Ch. 02'

Hope Ch 3 will not take 5 months - my interest is piqued.

There are so many questions yet to be answered:

Can Kyle's transformation be undone, since it was cock ring triggered?

What will Dylan do when Kyle fails to come home? Does he have regrets?

Have previous 'victim' disappearances triggered police investigations?

When will Diego and Kyle be on public display so they can be seen/found?

What will happen to Tim with Spence? Will he be a 'victim' too?

Will Dylan and Kyle have get the chance to build the relationship Dylan wants?

Thanks you! Ch 3 is almost ready! And I hope you lol enjoy it. Lots more hot stuff in store... it won't be 5 months I promise, that's what happens when you get a new dog and move lol

Thank you for the reply - can't wait to see what twists play out - love what you have written so far

I've been fortunate to be in the same house for nearly 26 years (longest by far of the 9 I've lived in) and don't plan on any change soon unless my health says otherwise

Hopefully I don't either lol. I actually have an updated version of ch 2.... I recently read through and noticed a bunch of issues that I wasn't happy with. They've been corrected and I added some erred detail and changed some as well. I'm trying to see if I can edit the story, if not, I'll have to delete and re post :( as long as you promise to check it out lol

I will save a copy of Ch 2 to compare with the revision - it's amazing how rereading something can point out little things you'd like to change/correct

Many of my work presentations have been through numerous rewrites trying to get it just right - but at some point you must go with what you have

You're totally right, I jumped the gun lol

So, it took me a while to get around to it, but I just submitted an edit on this story. So check it out in a couple days when it shows up. i cleaned it up and added better detail

Thanks for the heads up, I'll be watching for the new edit - nothing as of Feb 6

Sorry for the confusion, the header info shows the original posting date from November, but when I checked later I saw that the content was in fact different

Thanks again for all your efforts

Z

Hope you liked it

I liked the addition of Kyle's thoughts during his seduction by Marcus - I had wondered what he anticipated would happen after Marcus' "you're next" statement

It appears that Marcus exerts some kind of mind control over his victims to weaken any resistance to his advances

I'm interested in Dylan's reaction when Kyle fails to come home and how Spence will attempt to ensnare Tim in this whole mess

Will Kyle ever escape his transformation with Dylan's assistance? He exited the story way too soon. The Adam Ayash comparison helped give a good visualization of Kyle's appearance even if Adam is a bit shorter than Kyle's 6'6".

Thanks for the new version it is definitely better than the original one

Just checking if/when Ch 3 will be available - I have waited 'til 5 months had elapsed since the rewrite of Ch 2 was posted - your 12/29 post indicated Ch 3 was almost done - I check nearly every day for this one and updates to other stories that I follow

Hope everything is OK with the new home and your dog

Sorry to pester you, but as I posted earlier my curiosity about how things wil unfold is getting the better of me - thanks for "listening"

I've also been looking forward to Chapter 3 and hope you're doing ok.

Hey everyone, especially you two, I'm very sorry for the delay. Ch 3 is and has been done. There's another site that I post on that's exclusively to this type of fetish, and I could have sworn I uploaded here two. Blonde moment? lol I uploaddd this morning when I saw your comments, it should be approved in a couple says. Again, I'm really sorry for the delay and I appreciate you all for reading my stories.