All Comments on 'Club Neon'

It was all going so nicely until we got to the ten inch cock. So dumb.

It would have been a 5, but just like someone commented anonymously, the 10 inch dick stuff ruined it. That has been used so many freaking times that it has long since passed beyond dull and boring straight into ridiculous and absurd. I couldn’t even get motivated enough to give you a 4. 3/5

He’s Superman with a dark secret… 🤣

I disagree with with the first anonymous comment, it wasn't going from from the very beginning.

Terrible. That's all I could say about this.

I like the store very much but it needs to be proofread, carefully proofread

Thank you everyone for your critique and comments. I strive to learn and become a better writer.

The irony is though, Kyle is based on an actual person. 10 inch dick included.

Just a reader not a writer though not much of a story it made me smile thank you

Nice n loving