by teapetty
Ambitious tale
Lovely sensual descriptions, just short of being overdone, emotionally centered in the here-and-now, an earthy, elegant story. Well done.
Did it end? Do we just assume that the marriage is over? If so she's a complete idiot.
Very sensual, love the detail and eroticism of it all. Got my fingers crossed for a follow up !
Tess (uk)