All Comments on 'Co-worker Golden Shower'

Good start to a story, but please proofread and edit so thoughts are differentiated from spoken words. I had to re-read much of to to determine who was saying or thinking what.

Delightful.

What a perfect way to "lighten" the mood at a business conference. I wish I had thought of that when I was attending these meetings.

To go from Good to Great you need to add more chapters or spend more time developing the story. Where do they go between breakfast and the next year?

Can I piss on the author for this pile of crap. Come on. Are you speaking out loud or thinking to yourself. It was harder to follow than a Braille road map

Being a pee fetishist i was able to overlook the shortcomings mentioned in the other comments. i would have preferred it if the favor had been returned, however..

Very nice, where do we go from here? 98.7 degrees is wonderful. What else?