All Comments on 'Coach Daddy Ch. 05'

loved it and can't wait to see what happens next.

Whilst the story was interesting spelling pedants don't like cloths instead of clothes and heals instead of heels! Please use a spell checker.

Sorry Joe, I missed that one. As for spell check, its a word, and spell check won't consider it an error. That was a mistake of mine for not catching during the edit.

Keep it going :)

The author's username has a grammatical error in it, so I really didn't have high hopes for grammar or spelling in this story, but so far it's been pretty good.