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SatyrDickSatyrDick3 months ago

[17.02.24]

Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

WalterWoodyWalterWoody3 months ago

Very good story, and it could be great if some of those mistakes weren't there. You said LOSS a few times when it should have been LOST. JESTER is a buffoon, while GESTURE means a movement to explain. Little things add up and improve the readability.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

“nice jester”?

xDominantxxDominantx2 months ago

Liked the story line.

You need a proof-reader to make corrections for you.

I'd be glad to help.

Tony

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