All Comments on 'Coach's New Plaything'

Randomly calling women bitches isn't the flex you people think it is. Stop writing sexist shit in the name of being horny.

This was well-written, but it was also a disturbing trip through the mind of a devious and manipulative control freak. I usually enjoy your stuff, but not this. His motives were always ulterior.

Loved it. Some grammar issues with He and I but not enough to confuse the reader too much. Overall very well written and enjoyable. They are lucky to have found each other and should have a few years to enjoy. She will become a woman and if he breeds her that will change the dynamics so hopefully he will delay motherhood and continue to enjoy the woman she is becoming. She is on her way to becoming a strong confident skilled slut.