All Comments on 'Coast to Coast Pt. 01'

by Phileas123

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
huh?

Did you not realize it is only a 4 hour drive between LA and Vegas?

Phileas123Phileas123over 4 years agoAuthor
Actually......

No, I'm not from there..... So travel distances may be a little botched! Ops.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story

i like your story very much and i never expected that dwan wear the chastity corset. This turn surprised me and I would be very happy to continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I absolutely love the chastity corset and Dawn's predicament but I simply cannot understand where they are driving to or why. Sort of feels like the author changed their mind part way through writing the story then just ditched the driving part of the plot and went to Vegas?

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