by realbadboi
Incredible, the dinamic between them is well written. How shy dominated him. Hope third chapter will be soon. That promis taking him outside naked hands tide behind his back wearing his cage and buttplug is exciting.
Thanks for all the comments and suggestions on the last chapter. More coming...
So, so story. It would have been hotter if the spelling and grammar were correct. It would have been even hotter if the viewpoint were omniscient so we could see, hear, feel everything that Miss Simmons and her boy toy saw, heard, felt, thought. A volunteer editor from Literotica would be useful, as would reading and implementing the education provided by the articles in Literotica's writers how-to section.