All Comments on 'Cock Caged by a Big Older Lady Ch. 02'

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QwertoQwertoover 1 year ago

Incredible, the dinamic between them is well written. How shy dominated him. Hope third chapter will be soon. That promis taking him outside naked hands tide behind his back wearing his cage and buttplug is exciting.

realbadboirealbadboiover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for all the comments and suggestions on the last chapter. More coming...

TNsourdoughTNsourdoughover 1 year ago

So, so story. It would have been hotter if the spelling and grammar were correct. It would have been even hotter if the viewpoint were omniscient so we could see, hear, feel everything that Miss Simmons and her boy toy saw, heard, felt, thought. A volunteer editor from Literotica would be useful, as would reading and implementing the education provided by the articles in Literotica's writers how-to section.

BetaDickSlaveBetaDickSlaveabout 1 year ago

I liked it, keep going :))

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

You really need to proof read the story, takes a lot away from it.

Lking4u2Lking4u25 months ago

Isn't it time to reprise the story and add Chapters 3 and 4...

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Next chapter? I have been waiting for that

DiaperboyMiDiaperboyMi2 months ago

Awesome story. Wish it happened to me. Can't wait for the next chapter. 😊

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