All Comments on 'Cock of Zeus S01E02'

I understand the need to get the words out of one's head and onto paper but this seems like a very rushed story. It needs some refinement otherwise a decent (or decadent) concept

This was putrid. It doesn't make sense. If you knew anything about the mechanics of writing, it might make slightly more sense, but I kind of doubt it.

It felt like you had a story in your mind, then wrote down bits and pieces of it and left the rest of it out. This wasn't a story, it was the bad parts of a hundred nightmares thrown together in arbitrary order.