All Comments on 'Cockatoo Pt. 01'

Well written start to the story - I am always pleased by proper grammar and a good vocabulary - and am looking forward to the continuation. I have also enjoyed several visits to Thailand, and it was nice to have the memories jogged (the accuracy in place & activity descriptions really does count!). Thanks!

A reasonable, credible flow of the story. I am actually interested in the characters.

I've always been fascinated by the katois and would love to learn more. The "effect" of noticing something more when seeing it is fabulous. Please continue. It's a great read.

great story so far.

I love this build-up, the descriptions - it gives a solid impression of traveling to Thailand. I can't wait to see if the sex is just as colorful and detailed. :)

I fully agree with you Anon., the quality of this writing is a pleasure for us readers.

As an expat, and living in Thailand (far from a tourist area) I am impressed with your descriptions of people and places. A minor point, though; Katoey is considered a somewhat disdainful manner of referring to Ladyboys. My girlfriend, at 40-odd years old, still considers herself a Ladyboy rather than Katoey or LadyMan.

Please keep up what promises to be an excellent story.

Geoff

thank you for this story. i cannot wait for the second part

Good story so far looking forward to more.

looking forward to reading more,,,

This is a phenomenal story series I have loved every word, en and flower is a masterpiece go me