All Comments on 'Cocks Ch. 02'

Loved the story. It didn't read that you wrote out of your comfort zone as you said, but it felt natural and actually better than some male writers would portray it. I don't even think that you need to do a follow up/sequel. It was superb in it self. But I'm definitely looking forward to see what else you can write

Hot story

I can't imagine any college or university allowing a senior project like this one, but it's a great fantasy.

Now I'm looking forward to reading "Boobs Plus."

another really interesting story from you. thanks.

A delight to read...totally draws one in!!!!

Good to see your back! Your writing and story telling is great! Looking forward to reading more.

A.R., never! Never could you write anything less than a 5-star work. Whether writing from a male or a female perspective, you hit all the right notes. Again, I'm glad you're back at the keyboard and look forward to enjoying whatever you write. Thank you.

love this story

It’s good to have you back!

I really enjoyed the story and particularly the relationships. There is a rare quality about your story and it successfully engaged me in the characters' lives AND the sexual activity. Well done!

Sad to see this series end, if it does, I'd love to hear about "boobs plus"....

Love the story.

Added you to my favorites

Bravo and welcome back.

Fun story. Thanks

Thanks for another great story

I love the characters and you have nailed the male perspective

This is an outstanding story, well done! You hit the male perspective perfectly and I love all the various connections. Plus the idea for the art project is fantastic. I would absolutely go see that (or certainly participate, if asked :-)

It's so great to see you back in your writer's chair again, I've missed you.

This was an excellent return to the fold story.

I think you managed to write well from the male point of view (pun intended).

Love the story, great writing, looking forward to the film.

Really enjoyed this story Very erotic. I'll be reading all your writing in the coming days and awaiting new works. Thank you.

I enjoy your writing. A very different style than how I write, but I only wish I could write as you do. P.ease keep it up!

Such a loving and kind style of writing about these college students. Good job!

***** Five. You seem to have a nice grasp (heh) on the male uh, experience and even our psyche. If you feel the insecurities then you have a lot going for you. Write on!

Dearest, this is splendid. Your writing and characterization gets better and better. I am impressed by how well you’ve been handling the male POV; as a man, I would not be surprised to learn that it had been written by another man. (Possibly we don’t anatomize you all quite so much, but maybe some of us do.)

Lord, Gretchen is Aphrodite herself, isn’t she? Or maybe she’s Eros?

I loved this! As the owner of a cock it is such a pleasure to read about people who appreciate them.