All Comments on 'Codi's Choices Ch. 01'

This was a fantastic story especially for a first-timer. Looking forward to chapter 2!

This was a very interesting read. It felt like these were my own thoughts and playback inside my own head. Well written, thank you!

I really like your refreshing take on the concept and you seem to have struck the perfect balance between building the story with the slow burn while injecting action in as well. Really well done.

great first effort. Fun read, love the internal conflict.

Very good. I liked your story very much. Especially the conflict between the good girl and the bad girl. It very godd in its description. Can't wait for you to follow up.