by silkstockingslover
The endings all seemed rushed. I love pegging so yes, but sissy and cuckold also good
535. This is a clever story with several twisted endings, but I like the gangbang because I think it follows the natural progression of the storyline.
My absolute favorite ending is the Sissy ending. That could be because I wish I was in ben’s shoes, spit roasted between two Bic Black Cocks. I also liked the Gangbang ending, but I wish it was longer. Allow me to suggest another ending that could be used in a future edit. Combine the Sissy ending AND the Gangbang endings. Have both Belle and Ben be gangbanged. You could even could even incorporate the Pegged as well.
Great story as usual. Would love to see more of Bellr’s adventurers with BBC.
The gangbang was fun to watch but you developed the cuckold ending so well! OMG! Write more pretty please!
I'm going to have to try the multiple ending technique. You don't even have to write a good story. Racist, sexist, doesn't matter if you make multiple choices to distract from the multiple spelling errors or typo's! I thought you had an editor? Okay, that was too harsh considering the volume of work, but you did enter it into a contest!
I would have liked a fifth choice where she simply dumps her boyfriend, going on with her life and having Mr Big as a friend with benefits.
Story hit all the cliches but did it in an interesting way. Good story, though the grandmother part was way over the top.
Great read, interracial is one of my favs! Definitely like the Sissy ending, lol!
Uhhh. I kinda combined all the endings into my own version using all my favorite parts of the 4 of them. But If I HAD to pick just one? Sissy ending.
Pegged ending was the best imho. The grandma should take him in as a pet after all is said and done.
Love the story! Like all the alternative endings. Especially love the strap-on and gangbang