All Comments on 'Coed's BBC Discovery'

Gangbang

Gangbang!

I like the sissy ending (and also the pegging one, even though the grandma thing was a bit too much)

Pegged! I’d love to see you write a femdom story with a younger white guy submitting to an older black woman!

I can say I'm thankful that you kept the realism that black people do NOT use the word "cock" Thats one thing that no matter how many stories I read in this genre they ALWAYS get wrong when using black men in scenarios like this.

Loved this story. Especially ending #4

Lol. You have got to be kidding me

All endings are great, my favorite is 2

1 sissay

4

maybe you should add bred

Sissy one is cute!

Sissy please.

Cuckold

The whole fucking rambling was totally fantasy that would never occur....... in resemblance to any of the options. Did nothing for me....... crock.

How about a blend of all four...2 into 3 into 4 into 1

Story is great . I like the Sisy ending

All have their appeal, though probably number 3.

I am not a fan of the "master" bull crap, but good story anyway.

Liked ending #4.

#1 this would be my dream

The gangbang ending was great

Loved this story! I'll vote for the Gang Bang ending. No better way to show a tight little white cunt what a foursome of big black dick is all about.

All great endings!!! 2,4,1,3 in that order but any work!! Great story from my favorite storyteller!!!

Two stars. Your writing has gotten stale.

2

Sissy

Gangbang! You hit all the usual cliches of this kind of story but it was done well.

Gangbang was the best ending. So happy for her!

4, 1, 2, 3 in that order.

She would also get fucked anally.

Cuckold creampie eating

4

2

1 and 2 for me. I would have liked 3 as well but grandma was a bit much. Hot black girl would be great.

2

They're all good. I suppose the gangbang is best, but sissy is better written. Thinking of how I might write an ending. And definitely hoping for an illustrated version soon.

Sissy please! they become a slave couple

Pretty fuckin hot. 1 or 2 works for me!!!!

Sissy

Great. Four please

Oh #1 please. Many more chapters to follow?

Pegged

2 is the best ending

Personally I like the cuck or gangbang. Maybe gangbang a little more as I’ve always had a fantasy of my wife being taking by 5 - 6 guys, all cumming in her.

If I had to pick one ending it would have to be Cuckold, not that thre is anything wrong with the three others. However, what I really enjoyed was your telling of the thought process going through Belle's mind and her evolution to a better happier place. You have written like that before and this is another fine example of what I like in a good story. Thanks.

Sissy

I liked the number 4 gangbang ending best. The story was so well written that it was hard to choose. Thanks for writing!

2 please. Although I do like Sissy as well. Great story 5 Stars

2, I guess. I only gave this 4* because I detest black men calling white women bitches. Sorry, that's just me.

4

2 as well, seemed like the more thought out ending

Can't decide, let all 4 happen and let Belle be the total slut for Mr. Big.

Ending 2 worked best, followed by ending 4. In my mind the 3 young guys were the Master's sons, which is why they were there so quickly.

A fantastic story, very hot.

I would choose Sissy.

Cuckold Gangbang.5 Stars

One of your best stories to date. I liked that you had a humiliating aspect without running men down as complete trash. Of the endings 2 and 4 are great. I think you could turn this into additional stories very easily.

Ending 4 followed closely by ending 2

Tough choice, but 4 was the best for me. Great story

2 and or 4

So hard to choose but, #1

Great read!

1

If I have to pick only 1 then I'll pick Sissy. If I were to request another ending I would combine all of them together. Mr Big shows her the sissy being spit roasted then calls the additional participants as well as Ben upstairs for a gangbang where Ben is cucked and only allowed to fluff everyone and do cleanup duty. All the while Ben is used by all including Belle and grandma spit roasting Ben at the end.

ending number 1 is my favourite, i would be ben

God DAMN you now I have to jack off to this at LEAST 3 times! (version 4, ehh, maybe).

I chose the sissy ending, it’s the best written of the 4. The others seem very rushed.

I Could never pick up only

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pegging end is weird but kind of funny, I like it (but not really the grandma part). With sissy end i dont like he lied about the debt and sold her out.

Great and interesting story

Sissy

SISSY

Sissy or cucked are the best.

#2 Cucked was the best, but a fifth option #5 Pregnant would have been absolutely awesome!!!! Three stars

Loved the story. Number 4 was the best ending by far.

SISSY

2, then 1. and then 5, preggers

Should have ended it with pregnancy

Pegged

1, 4, 2, 3 Is the order for me, great story

1, 4, 2, 3 Is the order for me, great story

Sissy ending is by far the hottest. I my favorite stories are of coupes who love each other even more deeply as they both explore their need for BBC together.

Loved this story. Sissy.

Hopping for more parts : anal training for both Ben and Belle, side by side or both gangbanged. Pregnancy risk is a good idea too.

The Sissy.

Interesting way to end the story. Hope others take to it.

Absolutely loved this story. Sissy #1.

The Sissy

4 but we need more.

Loved the sissy ending

I too like the Sissy ending the best.

#4. Hard to beat a gangbang!

3. She's his mistress now.

#2 and #4

1 and 2

2

Tedious. Not my cup of tea. At least I know a type of story to avoid.

4

I like 1

Great story overall

Sissy

Great story and liked all endings except Gangbang! She deserved better?

4 - gangbang

1, if I have to pick but would prefer all of the endings being combined.

Pegged. But all of them were hot, as ever...

4

4

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