All Comments on 'Coeffecient of Friction'

Awesome story!

Love it. Next part!

This is SO hot - and very well written! Thank you!

Can’t wait for part two!

This is really hot, Handeguy. I had a few chuckles too. The prose and narratives are great. It is such a turn-on to read. Almost believable too.

It's the first story I've added to my favourites. So, well done all round. I'll probably read this again.

Very hot story, well written as well. That's a rare combination, looking forward to more!

Thank you all for the kind words! It was a huge boost of confidence. Just finished Part II and submitted to the moderators. Scheming up Part III as we speak....Damn, it's hard to masturbate and write at the same time.

Lovely premise.

But too short. And too lacking in details.

During joint masturbation there needed to be dialog. Suggestions from one to the others to do different things. Slower. Faster. Just one finger. Finger fuck pussies. Certainly something with the two sets of breasts. Something with Lily's ass. Just touch your clit/s. Tell me what you're thinking about while masturbating.

Four stars. Could have been five.

Hot! A great introduction to Lit.

What a lovely story, so real and so hot thank you

Could have been longer and more descriptive, but a pretty good, well written story.