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Thom44Thom44over 1 year ago

Delightful! Perfect for a video. It reads like a screenplay. The bystanders are a great touch.

Tales_of_teaTales_of_teaover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback. I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s the first time I’ve written a story in first person, so I wasn’t sure how it would go. So far it seems to have been well received.

RosewoodTulipRosewoodTulipover 1 year ago

Ok this is an instant fave. Sexy and funny doesn't always work but this does!

Tales_of_teaTales_of_tea4 months agoAuthor

Thanks! Sorry I missed this comment. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. It’s certainly a juggling act trying to find the right balance.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

What an absolutely perfect depiction of a wonderful fantasy.

Tales_of_teaTales_of_tea3 months agoAuthor

Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

ccitydudeccitydudeabout 1 month ago

I hope the coffee shop opens a franchise in my town. Well done.

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