All Comments on 'Collared Ch. 02'

A very enjoyable story. Descriptive and well written.

Wonderful story about the horrors of war. I sometimes dream about being in a situation like Alia. In reality it would be horrid but in my fantasies it would be much like your story! My only complaints is that the girls were never actually collared. I came to the story wanting to read about the humiliation of having a collar locked on one's neck. I got a great story but, alas, no collar. Perhaps it will happen in another chapter?

It is a very good sci fi tale. But two chapters of Collared and not a collar to be seen. Maybe next chapter. As noted before, this is potentially a winner similar to Gorean stories.

An excellent chapter, 5 stars. I was a bit surprised by the Horn town though, I was expecting more of a nomadic encampment. A town seems rather vulnerable to Imperial retribution. Also townspeople would need to maintain a higher level of personal hygiene or risk infectious diseases.

Not worried about the lack of collar as yet. Good things come to those who wait, or are forced to wait in this case. I was only worried that you wouldn't continue the story. The captives are being broken by the humiliating treatment and will ultimately be very pleased to become real owned slaves.

I looked up your profile and recalled that I had read "The Bitches Of Zulan" last year. Also an excellent story, very tightly constructed. I recommend it .

Awesome chapter. Eagerly awaiting the next.

Hoping you continue Alia's adventure. Yala and Alia's friendship trials deserve to be told.