All Comments on 'Colleen Ch. 02'

Reads like a real life story. After reading so many stories about incest here I feel like I’m totally open to it. I’m influenced by the manner in which the characters accept it, but wonder just how our society as a whole feels. Anyway, 5 stars for a great tale.

Bill S.

If you ever get any spare time , be a good thing if you took up writing ! Thanx

When I saw the the part about colleen getting a stomach bug I immediately thought it was cancer was about to mad im happy it wasn't

I have to say that I'm happy I am reading this after 2007 instead of waiting a year between chapters. On the other hand I am very sad that you published only a couple of stories. I love the fact that I appreciate the romance more than the sex.

"Colleen Ch. 02:" - Widowed Sister, Colleen O'Connor Witkowski and Divorced Brother, Robert (aka Bobby) O'Connor. As of today, Sunday 25 February, 2024 this Chapter 02 has two hundred eleven (211) comments (including this comment), which is thirty-one percent ( < 31 %) of the total comments through the first two (2) Chapters.

The disclosure that Bobby did not wait the (assumed) medically-advised time for cunnilingus on his sister's baby-making factory, was a gross oversight of actual facts. Otherwise, the story still has humongous element's of grandeur and elegance.

The tone and tenor of the story, emotionally, does appear somewhat degraded, maybe by the writer's inability to put all of the necessary emotions into Chapter 02, as well and thorough as he was able to do in Chapter 01; just an observation of mine from a "view of 35,000 feet in the air." Amyway, onto Chapter 03.

Quite possibly the best brother-sister romance story on here. It takes you on a journey - I'm not done yet and I don't want it to end. I feel like I'm living their life as I read it. Powerful stuff :) It deeply saddens me that there are people out there that would call their beautiful love such horrible names and spew nothing but venomous hatred at them. And we're meant to believe that such closed-minded toxic people are somehow better in some way. What a strange world we live in...

BEST! ROMANTIC! STORY! EVER!!! I have read quite a few offerings on this site, many of them very good. But in all honesty, "Colleen" is the very best EVER! Well written, well-paced, great characters, and an all-around wonderful story that draws readers in and makes them care about the people they are reading about. Literally every angle was covered (personally I would have liked a better f*ck you to Barbara, but that's just me; IMO she got off way too light). You have a fan here and I look forward to reading the rest of your stories and hope that you don't allow such a brilliant and beautiful hand at writing to fall away. Thank you so much for your thoughts, time, and abilities: sharing it with the world. I'm only sad that somehow the comments section is cut off of part three, thus I put it here; and the fact I can only bestow upon you an almost wholly underwhelming (yet well deserved) 5 Stars!!

I've read these stories more than once. You capture emotion so well. And that fear of being a first time parent. My God there is nothing scarier than that responsibility. You capture that love and the love between your protagonists so well.

5⭐️ story and series,,, I have lol my ass off in places that talk about duct tape and the diaper,,, Mexican food in mom and then what comes out of the baby ,,, the girls saying about tuna fish ,, it is life stuff ,,,, this is brother and sister yet also romance and love

5⭐️ for the rating,,, yet yet don’t have a 10⭐️ block

Second time reading this story is just as much fun as the first time. What a great story. Thanks for sharing.

This really is addictive! The sex in this chapter is not as hot (detailed?) as in the 1st chapter and that's okay. And that's also just my opinion. They were getting used to a new baby; adjusting. There is still humor such as the "tuna fish" statement. And when Bobby falls out of bed at Noelle's screaming to be fed. The visual of that is so very real to Real people experiencing that exact thing (Been there-done that). The expression of emotions by Everyone in this story is special. When Colleen and Bobby are lying in bed and Colleen is wondering if what she and Bobby are doing is the right thing and she asks Bobby about it. She is focused on and concerned about the Incest aspect. He is focused on the Love aspect. He lovingly and completely puts her concerns to rest. And when Bobby and Colleen announce to the family that she is pregnant again, Mike and Jimmy recounts to Bobby as they recall how he and Colleen were in love even as a little kids. And at Colleen's birthday celebration, their mom hits a home run with giving her son and daughter her blessing. And Mike and Jimmy do as well. This is a Love story between a brother and sister but it is about Family. Sappy?? Yeah maybe. But some of us like that.

2nd verse is just as good as the 1st.

This story is something I'll definitely revisit just because it's so damned sweet.

Great second chapter. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

Holy fuck my guy!!! I love this sooooooo much!! It just keeps getting better and I cant stop reading!! Its 2:30 in the morning right now and I have to get up early, but I cant stop reading lmao. Seriously though, great job and you are an amazing author and you should be getting paid for this stuff

I've read your story all the way through and have really enjoyed it, it will be added to my favorites.

a beautiful and poignant follow up from the first chapter. I thought that the characters were so real and the story so plausible that it could actually have happened. If all the people in the world were like this what a wonderful world we would live in. I will now turn my attention to the third chapter.

Crashbandicoot

Good stuff

Finally made an "honest woman" out of her! This continues to be a great story. The degree of thought and the quality of writing put into it are exceptional. I applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and creative abilities to bring it your story. Thank you again for sharing your vision and talents.

I loved the descriptions you gave about Bobby’s early thoughts of his life with his newly found family that were very poinient and thoughtful. This story has taken a life of its own and I enjoyed it immensely. Never mind how sappy or how some details weren’t worked out as others thought. It was perfect for a story about two lives.

Sappy

I know that I read this story more than a year ago, but evidently I didn't comment on it at that time. I do know that there were several things that troubled me and I wanted to comment on them. In spite of the issues that I had, I still voted this a 5 and that vote is still registered above the comments section.

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Quoting from the story:

After a moments rest, Colleen again gently pushed me down until my face was almost between her legs. I rubbed my cheeks against her pubic area where the swollen lips of her vagina came together; her skin felt as smooth as satin.

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Okay, so this is leading up to the part where they are going to have sex right after she has given birth. There are several problems with this, and I have direct experience in this matter being a father of 4 from two different marriages. In both cases, the mother was given an episiotomy and until the stitches dissolved, vaginal intercourse was prohibited. This is the reason for the eight week rule. But even beyond that, the mother continues to drain body fluids for several days after giving birth. So not only would cunnilingus be unhealthy for the giver, it would also be really disgusting besides.

Both of my wives expressed a desire to continue being intimate by giving me oral, but neither one of them wanted anything in return from me for more than a week or two following. And then we limited it to stimulating the clitoris with my hand until orgasm.

But it was still a sexy story and I enjoyed it.

I thought the story was wonderful great job 5star 🌟keep up the good work!

no mention of health insurance or who's names go on birth certificate?

wonder if they ever heard of birth control pills or condoms? Can't think my wife would have enjoyed or even wanted oral sex 3 or 4 days after giving birth. Also, some blood related people get married "unofficially" by omitting "lawfully pronounce you man and wife" so its no big deal. How dumb is he to forget a Xmas present and asking her to marry him and not have an engagement ring?

Bobby seems like a retard at times!!

Money should be used to get a bigger house!!

A lovely, gentle story. Easily earns 5 stars.

That said, it is utter fantasy. What baby sleeps through the night at three months?????

My second time of reading this and it's just as good as the first.

Just a shame I can't give you another 5 Stars.

Rapier

Long drawn out story that is getting boring.

Again absolutely fantastic. I should’ve been asleep about 4 hours ago but I can’t and won’t stop reading. I know it’s been such a long time since this was written (I was still in grade school to put it in perspective and make some of you feel old) but I hope you still come see all the appreciation your work gets

Wow that's all i can say, love ❤ it.

Hello - It is almost 16 years since this was published, and it is still wonderful to people like me. My sister has been my best friend since I can remember. We were buddy and sis as children, inseparable and in love. We experimented with making love as children, yes children. The last time was when I was 15 and she was 13 1/2. Life separated us when she was married soon after high school. I hated that guy from the time I met him! She later told me That she only married him to get away from our parents. I am 73 and happily married, but I still Love Sis as much as ever. We were both single after her husband died and I was divorced. I had some real struggles to not tell her how much I loved her, and not as my sister. I still might...

Love it---I am hooked. Cannot wait to read next chapter.

Again I will say that you have done a fantastic job. In the eyes of an old man who has read all of my life I am truly blessed to have read your story. Thank you very much. K A L

The story creates wonderful pictures in my mind for me no higher compliment thank you

Wholesome! We all need wholesome sweetness in our lives. Such sweet fluff (injects insulin)!

I enjoy reading it very much... Thank you...

Love it

It's really one of the best brother/sister tales I've read in many years. Maybe that will serve as an excuse for commenting on each part individually. Again it's CINCO ESTRELLAS!

By FAR the most emotion provoking story I have read. And that covers a LOT of stories!

Even if the sex parts were much more abbreviated it would still be an outstanding work. And it truly is not merely another story. It is a work, only able to be created by a person of rare and unusual talent.

Thank you so very very much for sharing your talents with us!

Thank you for this story.

a happy tale

Fantastic story of sibling romance and pure love. I am really enjoying your sexy tale. Colleen sounds like a very wonderful woman.

after reading the book I find that I feel so sorry for Barbra as he never listened to the explanation from her, If he had loved her he should at least listen and then go onto his life. Did she do it because she was protecting him? Did she do it in a lustful way?

Style and content are pretty good. There are a bunch of spelling and grammatical errors. Mostly the story flows well. It is mostly an enjoyable romantic story. This read through that's what I wanted so I looked until I found it again.

Beautiful story that is wonderfully written. A very loving story. One complaint, it's very hard to believe a woman would be even remotely interested in any kind of sex, much less oral, a few days after giving birth. It was so jarring it really ripped me out of the story for a bit. I realize this comes long after it's written, just couldn't let it go.

Keep up the great work. You write so people want to read more. The story flows.. Please keep itup.

Loved the second chapter, can't wait to read the third. The first page of this one gave me literary diabetes, and I couldn't be happier about that. Well done.

He finally sealed the deal and besides that everyone knew they loved each other while growing up they just did not know that they would take it to the ultimate level. Fantastic story and yes in my favorites one of the best that I have read and that is why it took you a length of time to complete it. 10 stars if I could give it.

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Sorry, I really like to give positive feedback, but this one (second part) is unf***ingbelievable boring. No twists and turns just supercheesy sweettalking stuff and two people fucking like retarded rabbits.

I like the way you are able to work sentences though. Kind of a fluent plot and easy to read.

A GREAT STORY THROUGH AND THROUGH. A LITTLE SEX, A LITTLE HUMOR, AND ROMANTIC. A JOY TO READ. I HOPE YOU ARE STILL AN ACTIVE AUTHOR. ITS A SHAME TO LOSE YOU.

You had me until you had the 2 main characters have oral sex right after birth! No self respecting person. Be it make or female will go down on a bleeding pussy. That baby bleeds for 6 to 8 weeks! Unless you like that , then that's your shit!

This chapter seemed to be more of everyone coming to terms; to accept the way things have developed and to be supportive. All about family love/commitment. Perfect.

Not much detail of sex in this chapter other than there was at least enough to make another baby. And that's okay. I loved it the way it is. AND, More great humor. The "eating tuna fish" and "herd instinct" comments! LMAO!

I do hope Texas Refugee is okay. When I read stories so well written like this, I wonder 2 things: 1) Where does someone get their inspiration to write like this? and, 2) Why does someone who can write like this disappear? 5*. -dave

Every couple of years I come back and read this through.

Lately I start at p.2 of Ch. 01, nothing of Barbara's contribution to the story is worth re-reading, regardless of it's necessity to bring them together.

Thanks once again for sharing your time and talent,

Jason

i really liked overall story. its nice cute and all except where you contradict your own sentences.

you did not give much background to colleen and bill. except for when she says

she wanted to die when bill died.

she loved bill passionately.

in another sentence she said she loved bill very very much.

so i thought she really loved bill and she was devastated when he died.

then she says that she wonders whether she loved bill at all.

its a contradiction to above statements. their whole backstory shakes. i mean how can she not know whether she loved him or not. you portrayed her as smart intelligent and sophisticated. it bugs me. except for that i liked her character and i liked your story so i had to let you know that. and i know you wrote it a decade ago. so probably you might have forgot about it. anyway nice read. thanks.

...became pretty corny American as the long story "progressed".

The author must be own editor - spelling, grammar often wrong. "your" and "you're" cannot be interchanged, since their meanings differ. Same goes for "Colleen and I" and "Colleen and me". Author uses the wrong choice every single time. Correct would be "the dog slept between Colleen and ME". As would "Colleen and I both fucked the dog". Basic English.

I am not kidding I do read this story about every two week it is mt favorite story on this site! I am thankful my father was a printer and worked in printing places and binderies for 30 years, he taught me how to make books by hand, I have 4 copies of this story professionally leather bound books 3 of them are in a safety deposit box. I first read this story in November of 2016 and been reading about every two week every since. this is a grate story if you haven't read it yet READ IT! There's a reason this story is in the Literotica Hall of Fame!

I have to thank the author for this beautiful share of his artwork. I have read this 23rd time today and still love this story to the core.....

Such a heartwarming story. I love it.

Great story by a greatly talented writer. If you are still with us, please drop us a note.

A great win for Colleen Colleen Ch. 02

you really tell an interesting and sexy story. very loving, sensual. i'm looking forward to chapter 3. i know you haven't written in a while - hopefully after these years off you'll start again. great reading! Thanks!

I really do want to hear Barbara's story but I hope you don't have her show up and screw things up for Bobby and Colleen. You have a real talent. Keep writing.

I AM TEMPTED TO COMMENT THAT THE WIVES OF THREE BROTHERS - SHARON , MI LIN AND COLLEEN HAVE CONSPIRED TO PUT EFFORTS RATHER COINCIDE THAT NIGHT - COLLEENS BIRTH DAY NIGHT - TO EACH OF THEMSELVES TO HAVE MATING WITH THEIR PARTNERS TO CULMINATE IN CONCEIVEMENT AND DELIVER ABOUT THE SAME PERIOD OF TIME (WEEK) IN THE FUTURE. THE CHAPTER THREE MAY REVEAL THE ACTUAL HAPPENINGS.

This is a great story I laugh at the right spots and got hot at the right I just found this Web site I hope to find more story in here like this one I really enjoyed how u did not make the women out to a women from a porn with big bobs and perfect body

Absolutely magnificent

Thanks. Feel like I'm getting an inside peek at this great love story

The part about being good/bad at golf was confusing, like maybe the first part about it didn't agree with the second. But aside from that, wonderful story. Well thought out and well written all around.

See old 8/28/16 is living proof that "MORONS" still abound.

What part of "Fiction" is hard to understand.

Thanks for continuing a great story, so realistically and with such consummate professionalism. Now, I'll go read Part Three. (Goody, Goody!)

This author deserves recognition for

Great imagination in its construction

a well deserved pat on the back

Here is to more from him

This is not a romance. It's a Sister-Fetish-Sex-DELUSION, written by a good writer who stopped giving a damn halfway through the first chapter. The Hell with it. Let all the sister lusting morons tell you what a great work of "art" you've produced. Just don't take them too seriously. You have talent, but you've settled on shoddy storytelling. It's a shame, it truly is.

This is a great love story - can't wait for the next chapter

A true love story and yes the are brother and sister but really they are two people deeply in love with each other. The two daughters that Bill was there father and now Bobby is make up a loving caring part of the family. All of the people just come to life on the pages. Everyone should have a family and friends like these.

Ron / Texas

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You know it is not filled with sex and copulation and details of love. A great change and a true love story. Contrary to what some people have written, don't sweat the small stuff. If all people can do is point out the grammatical errors or proof writing, then their life is a sham. Trying to make themselves look and feel better by tearing others down. love this story and thanks for a great read...

larry

My favorite love story yes love story. Two people that have loved each other there whole life finally get a chance to be together as they should be.

Ron

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A TRAIN WRECK MECHANICALLY. As such a skilled storyteller, I am astonished that you or your editor did not take the time to proofread or edit this otherwise superior effort. You lost 1* for failing to follow through on this less important, but nevertheless important aspect of good writing.

Love your story, thank you...

It's a good story, but I have to admit I liked the first part better. This story meanders along from one perfect scene to the next. Not that we need high drama or shootouts, but a little less sugar and more in terms of a story arc wouldn't go amiss.

Nonetheless, it's very well told, and the scenes of the first time father are very recognisable.

Not the sexiest story I've ever read, but nevertheless, one of the best. I'm reading this when I should be paying attention to a group of women playing duplicate bridge, and having to stifle my laugher and yes, my tears, too, as I read.

pure schmaltz

As above but Red Hot Love. It is so good to read a story so full of love not just between Colleen and Bobby but the whole family.

Ron. Texas

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So much better than good. This is one of the most loving heart warming stories that I have had the privilege to read. It is in my favorites and I have read it many times. Thank you for such a good story.

Ron

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In my favorites and the more times that I read it the more that I enjoy it.

A true love story...

Ron. Texas. cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Ok good story but after only a couple days from birth her pussy would still be leaking blood and other things. So i doubt he would be licking it.

THE STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER.

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Loved this story one of the best I've read

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! The characters are so believable. Bobby and Colleen make me smile. I hope you will write more about them but I also hope you have other stories as well. Great Work!!!

has indeed become something very different. Not bad different, just different. What started out as a cheating wife story with Barbara, has become a romance with Colleen. The story device employed at the beginning has long since been eclipsed. In fact, it is hard to remember Barbara and her child at all.

Love, happiness, sadness, family and humor..all the makings

of a perfect story. Go for it....

one word... awesome

Wonderful story!

A reread has confirmed that this is a magical story.

As before I am in love with that delightful niece Patricia.

What a family.

The best story I have read on Literoca. Would like to have read the ex-wives explanation though. Very well written. Just the right amount of background, romance and sex. I truly wish I could write nearly as well.

One (and the only one) point.

at a restaurant you have deSSert not deSert - unless it's really sandy.

Apart from that a great tale.

Yes this story has taken on a life of its own. It is beautiful.

i just love this story soo much........you are an awesome writer....GREAT WORK

.....getting better and better!! This would make such a great story in book form. The pure flow and content are so good and so on target that the reader can;t help but get completely inside the events as they occur. Most excellent!!! You should be paid for this story!!!

This has been a great story. I have loved reading all of it ever since the very first one. I can't ever wait until I read the next one. Bobby, you have done a great job telling about you love that you and you sister have for each other and the love of your whole family. Please keep writing.

This story really has taken its own life

I enjoy reading this for more than just its erotic factor It's an amazing story

Never ever in all my time, has this old red neck ever thought a story about a bother and sister in love would bring such laughter and tears and enjoyment to this old man. I will remember forever that comment about, what goes into momma comes out the baby. Got me some nieces and nephews who might enjoy a big old feed of Mexican food. I don't know what else to say other than, Thank you, and the next chapter is highly anticipated.