All Comments on 'Colleen Ch. 04'

This is on of the best written stories on this website, although I do believe you ended a bit prematurely.

The ending was too short!

Another exceedingly great chapter. Loved the descriptive account of the cube action and his making Colleen understand he was still in control of her actions as well. Definitely looking forward to reading the next chapter. Again I applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.